A technomancer's journey in an apocalyptic world

Getting a chance to join a reputed college, chance to represent his country in international... Read more Getting a chance to join a reputed college, chance to represent his country in international sports, a 15 year Ryan had everything a person could dream off to have a stable career and one day a lavish life but alas it all changed one night because of It’s arrival. The world itself changed because of It, Earth’s geography barely recognizable anymore, all semblance of Modern Civilization erased and survivors began to mutate as Humanity tethered on the brink of extinction as the people slowly succumbed into their baser needs, the world became place where only the Strongest may survive.Ryan himself had changed he gained the Power to manipulate Technology on his mere whim, but what would he do when technology itself had disappeared from the face of the planet build everything anew, while journey through and rediscovering a new but treacherous planet, fighting, foraging, rescuing others and trying to survive and may be one day unearth the truth behind the cataclysm. Collapse System, Kingdom Building, Cheats, Weak to Strong, Zombies, Level System, Apocalypse, Aliens, Magic, Male Protagonist, Mutated Creatures, Survival, Transmigration, Transported to Another World The writing isn't that great. The conversations and internal dialog are long winded, the story pacing is almost frantic.There are some interesting ideas, but then others seem completely inane. The story lacks subtlety.The conversations are extremely stilted, possibly an artifact of the translation and original language, but it really makes the characters suffer.The characters themselves feel like they are from a GI Joe film, with much worse writing. Trying to read the first chapter is like attempting to drag your nutsack through 100 miles of glass, burning coals and lego bricks. I've never, ever seen such messy writing. Even machine translation knows how to use paragraphs. I could write a better story using a shotgun and rolls of toilet paper, and God knows how I'd do it but it would still be more readable than this. The first chapter is full of more cliches than a cultivation novel. Bad parents? Check.Annoying sisters? Check.Smart, overpowered MC in progress? Check.Terrible use of foreshadowing? Check.I mean, how bad can it possibly be, you may ask? Well...Unfortunately a bug fat no otherwise I would already have become the richest human ever.'Also, this is one of the paragraphs in the first chapter. If I wasn't a decent enough human, I would've left the spoiler tag out just so you'd all steer clear and save your lifespans because attempting to read this paragraph may result in several things such as diarrhea, hemorrhaging of the brain, spleen, heart and lungs, and immense pain in the pre-frontal cortex. However, I've left it in for you, to save you. This is a warning, read this paragraph at your own risk. I'm not liable for any damage that may be incurred as a result of pressing the spoiler tag below.SpoilerHis sisters no not sisters he refuse to call the two of them as such were his sisters, 'They always do something I am their scapegoat and it has always been like this for as long as I can remember not to mention my parents who always taking their side no matter what even if I bring the evidence the best could happen, 'Please they are children they are always mischievous��, yup and I who is younger than by over 2 years is not, and the worst 'How dare you frame your darling sisters' followed by a slap or two. To be frank I am irritated at them there was a time like every other children I loved them and adored them, then it turned to hate for them but then I realized what would I get for hating them will get I money for that? Unfortunately a bug fat no otherwise I would already have become the richest human ever.' thanks brother! I feel a migraine coming on and my ears are ringing. How did you manage to read that and not have a seizure? It's literally head ache inducing! Ow, my head says Ow! Huh you guys haven't discovered the DAO of MTL Dao of MTL....... That's tougher than comprehending the dao of Destiny and my respected cultivator..... Just how ..... JUST HOW DID YOU READ MTL AND BE OK? Heh I didn't comprehend DAO of MTL infact, I am recuperating from the backlash Ahhh I see, took the wrong path huh...... Hopefully you will recover back from it.I took few days from the backlash I got... My brain felt mushy like literally You guys are actually still trying? Some things are destined to be beyond the limits of mortals, don't break your minds on them Mtl. Google translate. We are alive, because what us kills, makes us stronger. What can’t kills us you mean😂 This is not mistake Then how can you go stringer when you are dead?😂 Because we work on the principle of "die, but do it." Death is not an excuse.And what is stringer? Fellow Daoist you are bold trying to comprehend the DAO Of Mtl I have it..I think gaining a divinity of MTLI've read Apotheosis 9000 chaptersI've read martial peak 6000 chaptersI've read im bringing the farm to another world 3000 chaptersEtcI knew my grammar and English was so terrible ...and it's worse nowI'm so happy 😁 AHAHA holy shit I honestly had a really good f#cking laugh from that one. My tooth are aching my god😭 Wahahaha the fck, what's wrong with my brain can undesstand this shitty paragraphs in just one read HAHAHAHA