Reborn: My Two Systems at War

A young girl opened her eyes, the left one glowing blue and the right one glowing red. With a... Read more A young girl opened her eyes, the left one glowing blue and the right one glowing red. With a smile, she looked at the bars on her window.The invisible force swirled on the tips of her fingers, making her smile even deeper.'Now, I don't know if I am lucky or unlucky.'She was framed and locked away. She was alone and cold. However, now she has awakened the memories of her past life, filled with betrayal and her two systems.'A world of magic? A world of space-faring ships? I will make them both mine!' With access to the two systems and the ability to travel between dimensions, she was ready to retake what was once hers, using her unique advantage of having access to both magic and advanced technology.***This novel has an infinity-world setting, meaning that MC will visit and travel across various universes and gain strength.Release schedule: 1 chapter each dayBonus chapter goals: 200, 250, 300 Collapse System, Magic, Superpowers, Reincarnation, Space, Futuristic Setting, Antihero Protagonist, Dark, Female Protagonist, Previous Life Talent, Weak to Strong This is bad.The plot is quite confusing and disorganized, which gives the impression that the author is writing from a rough draft. The transitions are just terrible, and sometimes it feels like chapters are either cut off or parts are missing.What is most off-putting is the character of MC. Always panicking and afraid of everything, with an unstable psyche. Her actions are not ordered and not fully thought out. The feeling of what she is doing is the first thing that comes to her mind...It's okay to add a little realism to the story, and it's okay to be scared or panicked. But the author must present it to readers in such a way that we understand it. But instead, it feels like the MC is always in a lower position, compared to all enemies or interlocutors. Always in fear and panic. Always doing things without thinking about the next steps.At least that's how I saw the MC and the plot. The author couldn't pull me into the story. I felt the same. I couldn't get past chapter 10. How far did you get? Stopped at chapter 30. I really didn’t see the point in reading further and wasting time. Why were the people in the twin towers so hungry?Because when they ordered pepperoni pizza they got plane Well interesting idea but we have yuri here...few audiences will be gone even before they read it...SpoilerJoin the ranobe discord, link in my profile Remember what's better that one scoop of protein powder, two cups I like the way you think rare yuri novel Lol